外国大学入学申请书（通用5篇）

外国大学入学申请书 篇1

In my mother’s more angry and disillusioned moods, she often declares that my sisters and I are “smarter than is good” for us, by which she means we are too ambitious, too independent-minded, and somehow, subtly un-Chinese. At such times, I do not argue, for I realize how difficult it must be for her and my father—having to deal with children who reject their simple idea of life and threaten to drag them into a future they do not understand.

For my parents, plans for our futures were very simple. We were to get good grades, go to good colleges, and become good scientists,

mathematicians, or engineers. It had to do with being Chinese. But my sisters and I rejected that future, and the year I came home with Honors in English, History and Debate was a year of disillusion for my parents. It was not that they weren’t proud of my accomplishments, but merely that they had certain ideas of what was safe and solid, what we did in life. Physics, math, turning in homework, and crossing the street when Hare Krishnas were on our side—those things were safe. But the Humanities we left for Pure Americans.

Unfortunately for my parents, however, the security of that world is simply not enough for me, and I have scared them more than once with what they call my “wild” treks into unfamiliar areas. I spent one afternoon interviewing the Hare Krishnas for our school newspaper—and they nearly called the police. Then, to make things worse, I decided to enter the Crystal Springs Drama contest. For my parents, acting was something Chinese girls did not do. It smacked of the bohemian, and was but a short step to drugs, debauchery, and all the dark, illicit facets of life. They never did approve of the experience—even despite my second place at Crystal Springs and my assurances that acting was, after all, no more than a whim.

What I was doing when was moving away from the security my parents prescribed. I was motivated by my own desire to see more of what life had to offer, and by ideas I’d picked up at my Curriculum Committee meetings. This committee consisted of teachers who felt that students should learn to understand life, not memorize formulas; that somehow our college preparatory curriculum had to be made less rigid. There were English teachers who wanted to integrate Math into other more “important” science courses, and Math teachers who wanted to abolish English entirely.

There were even some teachers who suggested making Transcendental Meditation a requirement. But the common denominator behind these

slightly eccentric ideas was a feeling that the school should produce more thoughtful individuals, for whom life meant more than good grades and Ivy League futures. Their values were precisely the opposite of those my parents had instilled in me.

It has been a difficult task indeed for me to reconcile these two opposing impulses. It would be simple enough just to rebel against all my parents expect. But I cannot afford to rebel. There is too much that is

fragile—the world my parents have worked so hard to build, the security that comes with it, and a fading Chinese heritage. I realize it must be immensely frustrating for my parents, with children who are persistently “too smart” for them and their simple idea of life, living in a land they have come to consider home, and yet can never fully understand. In a way, they have stopped trying to understand it, content with their own little microcosms. It is my burden now build my own, new world without shattering theirs; to plunge into the future without completely letting go of the past. And that is a challenge I am not at all certain I can meet. 点评Comments:

1.This is a good strong statement about the dilemma of being a part of two different cultures. The theme is backed by excellent examples of the conflict and the writing is clear, clean, and crisp. The essay then concludes with a compelling summary of the dilemma and the challenge it presents to the student.

2.A masterful job of explaining the conflict of being a child of two cultures. The writer feels strongly about the burden of being a first generation American, but struggles to understand her parents’ perspective. Ultimately she confesses implicitly that she cannot

understand them and faces her own future. The language is particularly impressive:“It smacked of the bohemian,” “subtly unChinese,” and “a fading Chinese heritage.” That she is not kinder to her parents does not make her unkind, just determined.

外国大学入学申请书 篇2

I guess it was inevitable that I’d be on hockey skates at some point in my life, but I did not expect that I’d become one of a rare group of female ice hockey officials before I even reached high school. Being born into a family of hockey players and figure skaters, it seemed that my destiny had already been decided.

Right from the beginning, my two older brothers and my father strapped me up and threw me onto the ice. I loved it and, in my mind, I was on my way to becoming a female Gretzky! But my mom had to think of something fast to drag her little girl away from this sport of ruffians. Enter my first hot pink figure skating dress! That was all it took to launch fifteen years of competitive figure skating. Even though figure skating soon became my passion, I always had an unsatisfied yearning for ice hockey. It took a great deal of convincing from my parents that competitive figure skating and ice hockey didn’t mix. My compromise became refereeing ice hockey; little did I know that I was beginning an activity that would influence my character and who I am today. When I began, I would only work with my dad and brothers. Everyone was friendly and accepting because I had just started. I soon realized though that to get better I needed to start refereeing with people I wasn’t related to, and that’s when my experience drastically changed. An apologetic smile and an “I’m sorry” wasn’t going to

get me through games now. As I began officiating higher-level games and dealing with more arrogant coaches, I suddenly entered a new male-dominated world, a world I had never experienced before. My confidence was shot, and all I wanted to do was get through each game and be able to leave. Sometimes I was even too scared to skate along the teams’ benches because I would get upset by what the coaches would yell to me. “Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” was a ment that coaches would spit at me during the course of a game. In their eyes, I did not belong on that ice, and they were going to do whatever they could do to make sure no women wanted to officiate their games. I was determined not to let them chase me off the ice.

I made the decision to stand up for myself. I never responded rudely to the coaches, but I did not let them walk all over me and destroy my confidence anymore. I started to act and feel more like the 4-year certified Atlantic District Official that I am. There were still a few situations that scared me. One time I called a penalty in a championship game during the third overtime and the team I penalized ended up losing because they got scored on. I knew I had made the right call, even though I was unnerved when I saw the losing teams’ parents waiting for me at my locker room; for the moment I wished I hadn’t called that penalty. Although it was scary at the time, I stood my ground and overcame my fears. That was an important

stepping-stone in my officiating career and in my life.

After four years of refereeing, I still can’t say it’s easy. Every game hands me something new and I never know what to expect. Now I have the confidence and preparation to deal with the unexpected, on and off the ice. I now also know take everything with a grain of salt and not let it get to me. I have learned that life is just like being out on the ice; if I am prepared and act with confidence, I will be perceived as confident. These are the little lessons that I’m grateful to have learned as a woman referee.

Things to Notice About This Essay

1. The author tells an interesting story about her experiences as a referee.

2. A sense of her personality—determination, flexibility, good humor—comes through in the narration.

3. Details like “Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” make the narration memorable (we’d love to hear more of these kinds of details).

4. The essay needs a faster start. The first paragraph (three sentences) says the same thing in both the first and third sentences—and gives away the essay’s surprise in the second! A good revision would all of paragraph one and start at paragraph two.

5. There’s too much frame here and not enough picture. The essay needs further development, especially about the difficulties of

becoming and being a ref, to keep it vivid.

6. The author should “dwell” in the meaning of the experience a little more at the end—“I wonder about…I also think…Sometimes I believe….” Significant experiences like this one, woven through many years of the author’s life, don’t mean just one thing—there are more insights and lessons to explore here.

外国大学入学申请书 篇3

尊敬的:

我是来自X院X班的。我《性格活泼开朗啊，处事沉着、果断，能够顾全大局啊。可以根据自己的性格写，我只是帮你做例子。》我在这里郑重承诺:“我将尽全力完成学校领导和同学们交给我的任务，使发展啊 好啊的写该部的东西。

我从前干过。在工作中，我学会了怎样解决一些矛盾，怎样协调好部各成员之间的关系，怎样处理好学习与工作之间的矛盾。我要进一步完善自己，提高自己各方面的素质，要进一步提高自己的工作热情，以饱满的热情和积极的心态去对待每一件事情;要进一步提高责任心，在工作中大胆创新，锐意进取，虚心地向别人学习并且有能力把发扬光大。

我将以“奉献校园，服务同学”为宗旨，真正做到为同学们服务 ，代表同学们行使权益，为校园的学风建设尽心尽力。在学生会利益前，坚持以学校、大多数同学的利益为重。努力。

(后面可以写一些如果没选上自己的努力表现)

我知道，再多灿烂的话语也只不过是一瞬间的智慧与激情，朴实的行动才是开在成功之路上的鲜花。我想，如果我当选的话，一定会言必行，行必果。

请给我一个施展才能，表现自己，服务同学的机会!

申请人:

年月日

外国大学入学申请书 篇4

尊敬的团学老师：

您们好!感谢您在百忙中惠阅这份申请。

我是11级.现在我申请*学院学生会文艺部部长一职。

不知不觉，在学生会生活和工作的时间已经有一年了，对文艺部的各项工作都有了深入的了解。学生会作为在我院团委直接领导下学生组织，它沟通着老师和同学。文艺部这个平台教会了我很多，它让我成熟，让我成长，不管在工作方式还是为人处事。在文艺部工作的一年多的时间里，我深刻的认识到，团结、协作是文艺部成员最应具备的精神。

回顾这一年，部里的活动我基本都积极参加了。经历了太多太多有意义的事，部里在这一年里举办很多有质量的晚会，有水准的比赛，从我刚进学生会的晚会，然后有“十佳歌手大赛”、“舞蹈大赛”、“元旦晚会”等等，同时我们和学生会其他部门积极合作共同完成学生会的工作!

加入文艺部是兴趣的指引，而热情是我竞选部长的最大优势。在老师的指导下，同学们的帮助下，我逐步了解并熟悉了文艺部的工作，先后参与了很多的活动，提高了自己的工作能力，与同学之间的配合也越来越来默契，与文艺部以及其他部门的同学建立了深厚的友谊和关系，在工作方面得到了来自他们的大力帮助。从进入文艺部起，我全力协助部长的工作，与全体同学一起将文艺部凝聚成了一个团结向上的集体，并加强与学生会其他部门之间的联系与配合。

我来竞选文艺部部长，因为我相信我的勤劳刻苦，相信我的创造进取之心。本学期我在外部没有其他活动了，于是积极的性格必定使我将我全部的精力，我全部的热情以及自身日益增长的组织办事能力投入到文艺部的工作中去。

除这几条优势之外，我完全符合团学老师要求的竞选者要求。1. 坚持四项基本原则，具有坚定正确的政治立场和较高的政治觉悟;2. 遵纪守法，品德优良，组织纪律性强，集体观念良好，无违法违纪行为;3. 学习认真刻苦，成绩良好;4. 热爱学生工作，认真负责，作风踏实，能吃苦耐劳，勇于奉献，具有一定的开拓创新精神。

假如我当选了文艺部部长一职，首先我会保质保量的完成团学老师、主席团发放的任务;其次，我会多思考，努力提出更多有意义、有利于团学工作、学院工作的活动，比如举办“院级班级班徽征集大赛”、“班级社团联谊活动”。并且在例行事务上尽量做到优化、精简化、高效化，加强与其他各部合作，以我们共同的热情、责任心以及能力，带给大家一个全新的学生会。也给自己一个展现自己、锻炼自己的舞台。

如果我没有当选院文艺部部长一职，我也不会气馁，会继续努力，全心全意尽自己最大的努力为全院同学服务。

希望团学老师能批准我的文艺部部长申请!

此致

敬礼!

20xx年x月x日

外国大学入学申请书 篇5

尊敬的团委学生会：

你好!我是__级__班的一名学生，我来自__。我是一个平凡的女孩，但是我不甘于平庸。我性格比较活泼，随和，能和同学们很好的交流沟通。我办事认真严谨，对工作负责。在高中时代，虽然学习很紧张，但是我仍然担任班级学习委员，很好的完成了老师安排下来的任务。透过一些学长学姐的介绍和自己的一些了解，我对于大学有了必须的认识。大学不再像我们高中时期那样，除了学习还是学习，而大学相对自由的时间比较多。在经历高中三年的默默学习之后，我期望能够在大学收获一些不同以往的经历与经验，所以在那里，我再次郑重的申请加入学习部。假如我加入，我将迚一步加强自身修养，劤力提高和完善自身的素质，我将时时要求自己"待人正直、公正办事";要求自己"严于律己、宽以待人";如果我不能加入，我也决不气馁，必须好好劤力，争取有更好的表现!

如果加入学习部，在服务同学的同时对我自身也会有很大的帮劣。首先能够促迚我自身的学习，为大家做出一种表率。在组织参加各种活劢的同时，对于我自身也是一种锻炼。在与同学，同伴的交流合作时，能够使我的视野更开阔，知识更丰富，使我接触更多的人，增强我的交际潜力和办事潜力。如果我有幸能成为咱们学习部的一员，我必须加倍劤力，以学习部为平台展示我的潜力发挥我的创造力和想象力来更好的完成我的工作，脚踏实地的去对待每一件事情，增强职责意识。也会充分发扬团队精神，用心的参与、组织各种形式的活劢，和同学共同迚步。即使最后，我失败了，我也不会灰心丧气，这次竞选本身对我来说就是一次很好的锻炼机会。我会找出自己的不足，更加劤力，让自己做的更好。最后，我再次郑重的申请加入学习部，期望组织给我一个机会。

申请人：